MAHC Scope, Principles, and Style Guidance
Writing for the MAHC
MAHC Program Goal:
- Resource: What is the Model Aquatic Health Code (MAHC)? (A video via NSF)
MAHC Terms of Reference:
MAHC Scope:
MAHC Code Changes:
MAHC Annex Changes:
MAHC Principles:
- Provide guidance on how state and local officials can transform a typical health department pool program into a data-driven, knowledge-based, risk reduction effort to prevent disease and injuries and promote healthy recreational water experiences.
- Evolution not revolution. We strive to incrementally improve systems to allow regulatory and industry partners to adapt to MAHC guidance.
MAHC Style:
- For enforcement, inspection, discussion, and MAHC indexing purposes, the MAHC is written to keep different enforceable elements separate under different section numbers. CDC discourages editorial requests that consolidate elements solely for reading or brevity purposes.
- MAHC guidance may be repeated in different areas to ensure users don’t miss guidance and because guidance may have to be worded differently (e.g., lists may be in operational areas as well as training areas) so deletions due to “repetition” are not warranted.
- Code language must be enforceable so wording is generally directive and imperative. The MAHC uses “shall” vs. other words such as “may,” “must,” or “should consider” that are not enforceable by public health officials.
- It is preferable and more efficient to consider whether a desired need can be met by referencing another code (NEC, fire code, plumbing code, etc.) rather than adding new wording to the MAHC. Wording should be added only if no such reference exists or the MAHC does not consider that existing standards adequately cover what is needed.
- Clarification of wording is preferable to deletion of entire sections thought to be unclear.
- Prose Writing
- Only 1 space after period.
- Spelling
- The following words are always spelled as one word: childcare, handrail, handwashing, healthcare, waterslide.
- CDC does not use the term daycare. Instead, use childcare.
- Small Caps
- All glossary terms present in the Code and Annex have been denoted with small caps text. There are separate glossaries for the Code and Annex as some terms are present in one document but not the other.
Reference Format:
Preferences for linking journal articles:
- HTML full text, if open access
- PDF full text, if open access
- PubMed abstract
- Other site abstract
- PubMed — right hand corner
- MMWR
- Emerging Infectious Diseases
- PLoS
- Superscript numbers on references.
- Should link to specific reference
- Should be located:
- Directly by the reference or
- After the period at the end of the referenced sentence
- Format is essentially the PubMed format that is rearranged to be authors-title-citation. All references should be checked for open access (upper right corner of PubMed abstract) with link to open access first or abstract if not open access.
- The title of the reference should be hyperlinked to open-access location or abstract in PubMed.
- If there is a PDF then the PDF icon is inserted so it does not break the reference in half
- The reference list at the end of the Annex will use complete references with all author names, but the footnoted references within the Annex text will only list the first author, then comma “et al”
- Example:
- Morgan OW, et al. Schistosomiasis among Recreational Users of Upper Nile River, Uganda, 2007. Emerg Infect Dis. 2010;16(5): 866-8.
- Example:
- Journal article format per PubMed format
- National Library of Medicine Journal Abbreviations for journals are listed at https://www.nlm.nih.gov/tsd/cataloging/contructitleabbre.html
- All authors listed
- Author last name-space-author initials (no periods between initials)-comma-last author (no “&” or “and” added)-period-space
- Full title (sentence case—NOT capitalized for each word)-period-space
- Journal abbreviation (IOM standard, not italicized, no periods after abbreviated portion of title—i.e., Epidemiol Infect)-period-space
- Year-semicolon-volume-(issue)-colon-full first page-dash- full last page-period
- Example:
- Buss BF, Safranek TJ, Magri JM, Török TJ, Beach MJ, Foley BP. Association between swimming pool operator certification and reduced pool chemistry violations — Nebraska, 2005–2006. J Environ Hlth. 2009;71(8):36–38.
- Example:
- Article name is sentence case—caps on first word and any genus names only.
- All species and genera names should be italicized in titles but no other italics (i.e., title, journal) are used
- Example:
- Golaszewski G, Seux R. The kinetics of the action of chloroisocyanurates on three bacteria: Pseudomonas aeruginosa, Streptococcus faecalis, and Staphylococcus aureus. Water Res. 1994;28(1): 207-217.
- Example:
- Web link as a reference
- The use of a web link should also include authors, document name, and access dates for link, etc. in addition to the link.
- Example:
- Gipson K. Pool and spa submersion: estimated injuries and reported fatalities, 2010 Report. May 2010. U.S. Consumer Product Safety Commission. Accessed on 02/27/2011 at http://www.cpsc.gov/library/foia/foia10/os/poolsub2010.pdf.
- Example:
- The use of a web link should also include authors, document name, and access dates for link, etc. in addition to the link.
- Books as references
- General format
- Authors or Editors. Book title. Edition. Secondary Author (or translator). Place of Publication: Publisher; Date of Publication. Total number of pages.
- Example:
- Eyre HJ, Lange DP, Morris LB. Informed decisions: the complete book of cancer diagnosis, treatment, and recovery. 2nd ed. Atlanta: American Cancer Society; c2002. 768 p.
- Example:
- Authors or Editors. Book title. Edition. Secondary Author (or translator). Place of Publication: Publisher; Date of Publication. Total number of pages.
- Book with no authors
- Start with the title of the book
- Format:
- Book title. Edition. Secondary Author (or translator). Place of Publication: Publisher; Date of Publication. Total number of pages.
- Example:
- HIV/AIDs resources: a nationwide directory. 10th ed. Longmont (CO): Guides for Living; c2004. 792 p.
- Example:
- Book title. Edition. Secondary Author (or translator). Place of Publication: Publisher; Date of Publication. Total number of pages.
- Parts of the book
- Volume of a book
- Format:
- Author. Title of Book. Edition. Place of Publication: Publisher; Date. Name of Part Number of Part, Title of Part; Location of Part.
- Example:
- Speroff L, Fritz MA. Clinical gynecologic endocrinology and infertility. 7th ed. Philadelphia: Lippincott Williams & Wilkins; c2005. Chapter 29, Endometriosis; p. 1103-33.
- Example:
- Author. Title of Book. Edition. Place of Publication: Publisher; Date. Name of Part Number of Part, Title of Part; Location of Part.
- General format